I like the situation and context, quite provocative. I can’t wait to see how it will follow. I agree with Hanna99, it is possible to improuve the dialogue . This is the kind of situation where the dialogue improuve a lot the impact on your teststerone 😉
Giacomomurgo
I like the situation and context, quite provocative. I can’t wait to see how it will follow. I agree with Hanna99, it is possible to improuve the dialogue . This is the kind of situation where the dialogue improuve a lot the impact on your teststerone 😉
Hanna99
The dialogue is a little weak needs better, I like the characters there are no problems there.. But the problem is the dialogue!