Hey man, the story’s good. But, I feel you’ve used way too many characters making it hard to keep track of everything and who’s fucking whom since it’s animation and characters do look similar. It would’ve been better if you only used the mom, son and maybe a couple more characters.
Hope you’ll take this constructive criticism into consideration for your future projects.
Keep up the good work
Sane as in chapters 1 and 2. The story develops a bit too slowly. The art work is very good, but of course there are some exaggerations of boobs and dicks. Get a load of this kids dick. I wish I could find a 3D comic that wouldn’t exaggerate so much and make it believable. But, still worth a reread to appreciate the new chapter.
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Papa
Hey man, the story’s good. But, I feel you’ve used way too many characters making it hard to keep track of everything and who’s fucking whom since it’s animation and characters do look similar. It would’ve been better if you only used the mom, son and maybe a couple more characters.
Hope you’ll take this constructive criticism into consideration for your future projects.
Keep up the good work
MommyLover
Again the dialogue is way too long and relation between mom-son is too slow. Her mom is still a mean bitch.
Jason Todd
It’s good. But it would be really turning on if the boy had a shy sister and he gets to fuck her on the island.
jakesmith
Sane as in chapters 1 and 2. The story develops a bit too slowly. The art work is very good, but of course there are some exaggerations of boobs and dicks. Get a load of this kids dick. I wish I could find a 3D comic that wouldn’t exaggerate so much and make it believable. But, still worth a reread to appreciate the new chapter.
DrTentakelliebe
tsk tsk tsk, all characters are over 18 that is a man’s dick ✧–( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡° )