Neil needs to call Grace as MOM to get the full flavor of the relationship. Its not normal if she is his mother to call her by first name. Continue writing with him calling her mom and it will heighten the incest storyline. He does call her Mom in a later chapter and this is the first and only time I was able to realize that its his mother and not some friend of family or an aunt/cousin etc.
Nice story but its lagging now in the story. Need more open sex acts where she just goes for it and devours his huge cock!! Maybe introduce some native men and women into the story and get some interracial action with Neil and a few older native black women.
Scott
Neil needs to call Grace as MOM to get the full flavor of the relationship. Its not normal if she is his mother to call her by first name. Continue writing with him calling her mom and it will heighten the incest storyline. He does call her Mom in a later chapter and this is the first and only time I was able to realize that its his mother and not some friend of family or an aunt/cousin etc.
Nice story but its lagging now in the story. Need more open sex acts where she just goes for it and devours his huge cock!! Maybe introduce some native men and women into the story and get some interracial action with Neil and a few older native black women.
Scott
Pretty good start.
NotScott
Scott’s a fagg
MajorTom910
who is grace anyway? Mom, aunt, sister, grandma or just a bit of a bend?
HateRedd
The animator’s proportions are way off. One slide she looks fine and the other not.