I’ve read all of it so far. The concept is nice and has a potential to be great but if Margaret’s manipulation doesn’t get toned down or story gets in the way of teaching her the hard lesson by putting her in her place from time to time, I personally think this work will lose its taste.
It’s not ended yet, which means it’s still redeemable. Good job with creating an interesting plot.
JigSaw
I’ve read all of it so far. The concept is nice and has a potential to be great but if Margaret’s manipulation doesn’t get toned down or story gets in the way of teaching her the hard lesson by putting her in her place from time to time, I personally think this work will lose its taste.
It’s not ended yet, which means it’s still redeemable. Good job with creating an interesting plot.