Part Nine is rather long and slow for what happens. I liked Rory and Brandi making up but then it fizzles out and goes nowhere. Gina should have invited him into the three-way. Also, what happened to Gina’s husband and daughter? Brandi sees them having sex with Gina but leaves and encounters Dylan and Rory. Rory talks Brandi into going back to Gina’s house but when they get there the husband and daughter are gone? Maybe they will reappear in part 10?
Rather long and slow chapter- finish it already. Also, why is Brandi hesitant at this point? She’s done Dylan, Gina, Ayana, Gracie and practically done Rory! And after seeing Gina doing it with her family she should be ready to go for it!
Also the dialog could be smoother with less misuse of words. The story also seems awkward. Brandi and Dylan should be on parallel courses of sexual encounters until at the end they hook up.
However, the art work is the best I’ve ever seen in this genre. Great body language and facial expressions. I hope there are more stories at Au Natural
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Michael Lewis
Part Nine is rather long and slow for what happens. I liked Rory and Brandi making up but then it fizzles out and goes nowhere. Gina should have invited him into the three-way. Also, what happened to Gina’s husband and daughter? Brandi sees them having sex with Gina but leaves and encounters Dylan and Rory. Rory talks Brandi into going back to Gina’s house but when they get there the husband and daughter are gone? Maybe they will reappear in part 10?
Michael Lewis
Rather long and slow chapter- finish it already. Also, why is Brandi hesitant at this point? She’s done Dylan, Gina, Ayana, Gracie and practically done Rory! And after seeing Gina doing it with her family she should be ready to go for it!
Also the dialog could be smoother with less misuse of words. The story also seems awkward. Brandi and Dylan should be on parallel courses of sexual encounters until at the end they hook up.
However, the art work is the best I’ve ever seen in this genre. Great body language and facial expressions. I hope there are more stories at Au Natural
Ultima
Im down Brandi fucking Pete or Tom but not Rory hes a piece of shit who harrassed her
Jaylen
Fuck Nah brah, they’ll make her even more of a slut bitch.
Sona
Please keep Brandi only for Dylan, not allow to fuck her by anybody